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 \begin{abstract}
 
-This paper describes the common procedure defined and adopted in the field of software lifecycle management, 
-the Continuous Integration and Delivery systems setup to manage the new releases, as a first step to ensure 
-the quality of the provided solutions, services or components, while strengthening the collaboration between 
+This paper describes the common procedure defined and adopted in the field of Software Lifecycle Management and
+ Continuous Integration and Delivery to manage the new releases, as a first step to ensure 
+the quality of the provided solutions, services and components, while strengthening the collaboration between 
 developers and operations teams  among different external projects.
-In particular, the paper analyses the common software lifecycle management procedure adopted in two EC funded
-project: eXtreme DataCloud \cite{xdc} and DEEP Hybrid DataCloud \cite{deep}.
+In particular, the paper analyses the common software lifecycle management procedure developed during the 
+INDIO-DataCloud \cite{indigo} project and recently improved and adopted in two EC funded
+projects: eXtreme DataCloud \cite{xdc} and DEEP Hybrid DataCloud \cite{deep}.
 \end{abstract}
 
 \section{Introduction}